Final Draft (Film Poster)

Final Draft

Below is the 5th and hopefully the final draft of my Film Magazine cover.

 Changes made:
Layout
Having compared my film magazine cover alongside existing film magazine covers, I noticed that most of them have perfect edges.

 I then took steps towards improving my magazine cover by aligning the text on my magazine cover, referring back to the guide tool for precision.

As you can see, it looks a lot better and very neat. 

Masthead improvements

I often consider myself to be a perfectionist because I never get to the point of complete satisfaction with my work. The magazine (although it looked complete), had one issue that was bugging me and it was with the Masthead. The 'I' in title of the magazine "Cinema," looked like a common 'L' and since a fair of the Masthead have been covered by the model's head, only added to the problem by making it difficult to recognise.

 

I thought I would change the "I" to common as a way of making things easier to read.